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Submitted: Aug 15, 2008    Reads: 35    Comments: 3    Likes: 2   


Waking Up Tired last night Breakfast? Maybe later. But right now, I'm in a maze of daze I'm so sore, but my eyes My eyes are working overtime On this wonderland of Red Orange Yellow Green Blue Purple Pink Am I dead? No, I'm Drunk on this universe of colour I don't want to step out this beautiful door Spectrum Rainbow Alternate Dimension Unaware, I might be still sleeping But no, I can hear noise, And the colour is dulling And I step back, Confusion Drilling holes in my head Where am I? I am awake. And I am looking out the window onto this opulent, turbulent, alluring, attractive, possesing, engaging, stunning, bewitching, fascinating, illustrial, divine, exquisite, amazing beautiful world.


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this was also good but there is special format for poetry or else its just a story u might wanna look at this! other wise it was really good i got where the sentence ended and stuuf ..............

Posted: Aug 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Thankyou for your great comment, but what do you mean? There's a way top make poetry come out better? Huh?

This was cool! I really like it. Well I like all your stuff. You should be a real writer. Get a pen name and make up your age and stuff. Send your work in. You could make history!

Posted: Aug 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Tankyou! This is really nice of you!

I like it! I love colours and this is very rainobwy. Nice!

~loliee11

Posted: Sep 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Hazzaaaaaaa! Yi sus tachiknonko Poptri!



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