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Black Night

Poem By: aanimalluver
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written a while ago, but still kind of fits my mood... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Mar 30, 2008    Reads: 47    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


Black is the night
That wraps its blanket
Around my shoulders

Black is the mourning
Of loved ones lost

Black are the birds
The winged messengers
Of the dark god
Who carry the restless souls

Of the lost
To the peaceful realms


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Irwin
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Very dark and gloomy but we must live through the night before we can experience the morning.

Posted: Mar 31, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you, I am having a bit of a hard time with the whole morning thing right now, as you might be able to tell from my other recent writing.
"No day but today"

this is really really good, great ideas! Very well written! Good job! :)

Posted: Apr 1, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you, i got some of the ideas from Tamora Pierce's book "Beka Cooper: Terrier"

"No day but today"



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