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Chateau; Be Alive

Poetry By: air

this is a typical metaphorical look-see at temperment, personality, and the linking to all that is. a look into how we evlove through emotions, and difficulties..a look into deep feeling..

it is a reference of how some come to learn harmony of their alchemical self.

Submitted:Feb 9, 2013    Reads: 17    Comments: 3    Likes: 2   

in cranked up immure city streets, lamp-lights gloried.

and in those tinsley areas of yorky-shire roads

are shared stories.

they call to you, and they are of the substance.

so you go and dance with, and 'within' without judgement.

you go into the feeling part in the middle.

where there would be the rose-mary vines;

chateau; 'be alive!'


'she says she was alive

even in her death'.

-now back to the underworld again

to come alive even more.

why does this place intrigue her mind so...

'she who seeks to understand even the most wrethched

of states, might find within, the valance to climb to the highers'

then there is a 'passage' in the 'inbetween' where you hold them

all at once.

and that is where the magic lies right?

-she is thaught to think that even in the belly of beast

there are secrets. and secret places where within lie

passages to a between.

and pauses her to reflect.


what distinguishes the lamp-light stories ...

the essence and fragility to return over and over again?

the urge to dance more fully each time, In what ever it is;

your work, your relationships, your nature, your source...?

after some thought she disguises herself and goes after the

beast once again. Tushay madam!


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