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Rainbow Secrets

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Submitted: Jul 27, 2008    Reads: 25    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   


Her fan of peacock feathers
unfurled
shimmered
again and again,
Morphing its colored vertices.

Now, fuse in your warm sentience.
Wild of light,
Who came to find out that
Love is as real as the wide city of night.

Gather around the fire, galactic children-
Plan the Great Escape.
Eat simple foods and drinks
Bread
Wine
Cheese
Fruit
A glass of cool water.


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Comments:

hi! alquimista. this is how i'd like it to be. with a fire and family and food around. gives a warm feeling. some poems are meant to spread a warm glow. this is one such. enjoyed its warmth. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

Author Comment:

The tale of the tribe, as they say. Warmth, love, and shelter. Thanks for your comment. =)

Hm. I don't read this as bubbly did.

I see it as incarnate passion and warming hands at the fire of life. But, if it's a rainbow secret....

Posted: Jul 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Altitude does wonders for perspective. I think that's what it comes down to. You receive the signals that you were meant to receive.

Thanks for the wonderful description.



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