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The poem concerns the meeting of two opposites; one of chaos and one of order. And how they become one. View table of contents...
Submitted: Mar 22, 2009 Reads: 79 Comments: 1 Likes: 1
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Angelo Gabriell:
Well written! Good use of rhyming and rhythm. An unusual tale or fable. Somewhat cryptic as well. Gave it an " I Like It" vote.
Recommend substituting other words for the asterisked (*) expletives. Will give this poem greater appeal. Earning it a wider readership.
Thank you for becoming a fan. Most appreciated.
Happy trails,
Ed Bradley.
Posted: Mar 23, 2009
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