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Poem By: AngelofTheNight
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Submitted: Apr 21, 2008 Reads: 46 Comments: 6 Likes: 4

The breeze so light and delicate

swaying gently without a trace

Gazing up and thinking of you

The clouds begin to form your face

Smooth curves form your eyes,

your fluffy hair and your lips,

I can't help but smile

as I blow you a kiss.

Your arms reach out to me

and wrap around me tight

Holding me close in this sweet embrace,

Oh, what a beautiful sight.

I've never felt this happy,

Since that day we had to part,

But you became my angel

And you're always in my heart

Watching over me with a smile

you wave and fly away.

Don't worry my love,

We'll meet again some day.

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Comments:

Itsuwari

Though I am not a big fan of the conventoinal rhyme scheme used here, I do love the subtly defiant cadence you used. You mixed well the emotions meant for this piece, both sorrow and hope, and again, the power is compliant and captivating.

Posted: Apr 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Awww, thank you. That means alot. I really thought I did a bad job on this piece.

mum55

This is a personal favorite poem as i can relate my feelings to it of someone i lost to heaven i loved, i really do think this is a great poem...have printed it off hope you do not mind......

Posted: Apr 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you, and I'm sorry to hear about the loss of someone you loved. I do not mind at all, I'm glad you like it. :)

xxemoxbfsxx

this poem had me so entranced. who is this angel and how has he got you wrapped around his heart. none the less this is like the second poem i read by you and i am not disappointed the least bit. you have such ways to capture the meaning and enrapture your fans thrusting them into your veiws. bravisamo. keep it up and take care.
Lydia_xxxx

Posted: May 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much, I appreciate it :D

Prizemoney0135

Question: is dis poem about a love one u had and he went to the after life? just asking...i like this poem cause it shows what emotion your feeling and dat it sounds like you put 120% in dis poem...i give dis poem a 15 out of 10, cause dis is some emotion..

Posted: May 23, 2008

Author Comment:

To answer your question: Yes, it's about a loved one I had who passed away... Yet my love never dies for him. :)
I'm glad you like it, and I appreciate all your comments, thank you! ^_^