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A Guardian Angel

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Submitted: Jun 13, 2008    Reads: 81    Comments: 11    Likes: 7   


My Guardian Angel

I'm being watched at a distance,
An aura of security is bestowed upon me.

Energized and alert,
Alive and focused.

I walk amongst the crowd,
Steady and stealthily.

Danger approaches,
I can feel it in the air.

I stare death in the face,
Overcoming its challenges.

Weapons pointed and aimed at me,
My plan has failed.

A bag of chrystals,
released from my hands.

Sirens and alarms,
Ringing through the night.

A dead end,
The final chapter.

Shots fired,
peircing my skin.

I fall to the ground,
Looking up to the sky.

I see wings in a distance,
A twinkle up high.

The pain is dispelled,
I take my final breath.

I am raised up,
On my guardian angel.


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Comments:

This is sad and in a way gives me that warm feeling inside..Good job. :)

Posted: Jun 13, 2008

Author Comment:

thnx

^^ lol.so true
just like what findingmyway said.
it does give a warm feeling

Posted: Jun 14, 2008

Author Comment:

in a way i guess..

^-^ Good first poem.






IT was very sad, and then ( I guess ) ended sort of happy. ( I'm not crazy ) Thats what I think.

Sarah

Posted: Jun 14, 2008

Author Comment:

hehe, thnx

Jesus ant you and me are more alike than i thought

Posted: Jun 14, 2008

Author Comment:

hehe you never saw my true "rage".. but I might make this into a story =P

*angelic choir*

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hehe =)

Cool-ie-o...I like it its awesome!!

Posted: Aug 14, 2008

Author Comment:

lol glad you liked it

Wow. That one really touched me. It made me wonder what it really is like to take your last breath. Its going to be different for everyone but it really made me think of my Hubby's mom.. Who died in a car crash 2 years ago. Very beautiful.

Thank you

-DD

Posted: Aug 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you, Sorry if it brought back any sad memories, but I'm glad you did enjoy it. =)

Aww,this is so beautful,and deep.Also amazing!
:)

Posted: Aug 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, glad you liked it ^-^

very deep....i liked it alot! :]

Posted: Aug 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much =D

It was a very nice poem, sad, but a peace is brought to the reader. I've seen an angel, wow, you're the first to ever hear that, but I wasn't close to death it was actually my grandmother I saw when I was worried whether she went to heaven or hell I saw her as an angel. Well written.

~DarkFairy~

Posted: Aug 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah, many people say that when someone passes and your constantly dreading and worrying over them, they will come to see you to let you know it will be alright ;) Thanks! I'm glad you liked it =D

I really like this poem.

Posted: Aug 28, 2008

Author Comment:

ty



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