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A Tragic Lullabye

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Submitted: Jul 7, 2008    Reads: 74    Comments: 10    Likes: 4   


A Tragic Lullabye

The echoing rythym,

just keep to the beat,

come and follow, the tune of my heart.

Its mellow remedy,

the dark calamity;

come and follow, the tune of my heart.

Keep to the rythym,

don't step out of line,

this beautiful song,

your voice will shine.

The echoing rythym,

just step in place,

I soon will follow,

lost in your embrace.

Follow the beat,

the beat of my heart;

on the third line,

thats where we start.

Begining again,

dancing in rythym,

come and follow, the tune of my heart.

The echoing rythym,

just keep to the beat,

watch as I do,

and take the lead.


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Comments:

aww, thanks Anthony. I wish I could write poems for people as good as you do. Oh yeah, now I feel really bad that my revenge somehow got on booksies homepage. SORRY.

L ♥

Posted: Jul 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol it's ok, don't worry about it ;)

A great poem, Ant! Nice rhythm, fabulous flow. You're one good writer! Nice work!

Posted: Jul 10, 2008

Author Comment:

O=) ..thnx

Great job! i told u u could do it.

Posted: Jul 10, 2008

Author Comment:

thnx =]

it is a magnifancet poem and you dicrbe with very good detail keep up the good work

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much, that means alot =D

i really like it.

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks =)

Aww this is sweet!!

Posted: Aug 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you =D

Yes,this is sweet,and nice.
:)

Posted: Aug 19, 2008

Author Comment:

hehe ty =)

I love this poem !! Great job!

Posted: Aug 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Hehe glad you liked it =)

O really like that poem. Keep it up.

Posted: Aug 28, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you

That was terific!

Posted: Sep 6, 2008

Author Comment:

ty =)



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