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Here With You

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Submitted: Jun 20, 2008    Reads: 65    Comments: 8    Likes: 6   


Here With You

All my hopes and dreams;

good times and the bad.

All my inspirations,

I want to be with you.

My first friend,

My first crush,

My first kiss,

My first date,

My first sickness

My first love,

My first hope,

My one and only dream.

My first vacation,

My first lover,

My first time,

My first car,

My first marriage,

I want to be with you.

My first family,

My first house,

My first divorce,

I will love you forever.

All this time, all these memories,

I want to be with you.

And here we are, at our end,

ready to take our final breath.

If I die, here and now;

all I want, is to be here,

with you by my side.


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Comments:

Aw, Someone got a girl friend.... who who who??? lol. or haven't u told her yet? Message me to tell me who!!!!!!!!

or don't idc.

Love u.
Sarah

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

hehe i dont have one ^-^..
Love you to :)

hi! ant. who's this lucky friend, who can claim everything of urs. or is it a top secret. ;-)

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

hehe actually its just another poem tht came to mind, but if there is someone; top secret ;)

Jack the Knife
(not registered user)

Hey, Ant. I've been reading your poems. If you are faking it - if there really is no great love of yours about whom you are writing - well then, you are, indeed, a great poet. On the other hand, if she does exist, she should feel thrilled to have such devotion for her declared for all to see. I liked this one the best, but I'm not going to let my wife see it. She'd wonder why I haven't written such words about her!

Posted: Jul 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol thank you so much, that means alot. Hehe I guess some people have asked the question if it is for someone I care about, but I guess either way it could go 50/50.. * a poem dedicated to a friend

Ant, these poems are amazing. You are such a talented writer. I only hope that in my works I can show the passion and love burning inside that you clearly show in your works.

Posted: Jul 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks alot, that means alot..

Your such a talented and amazing writer!! I love it!!

Posted: Aug 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks alot! =)

Soooo beautiful,amazing,sad,sweet,romantic,emotional.Wonderful!!!
Dont know what to say,lol.Its greeat.Really really really great poem.
I like it A LOT.
:)

Posted: Aug 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much!! =)

Ah the friendship that blossoms into a love, they say it's the best kind of love there is. I loved it.

~DarkFairy~

Posted: Aug 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Hehe thank you! Glad you enjoyed it =D

That was so beautiful. I almost started to cry.

Posted: Aug 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Aw I'm sorry =(
Glad you liked it ^-^



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