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Dedicated to :
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Submitted: Jul 8, 2008    Reads: 72    Comments: 11    Likes: 3   


My Friends

"A good friend remembers what we were and sees what we can be."
- Unknown

Standing with me all alone,

by my side until the end.

Ready to fight,

our last stand.

Heavily outnumbered,

all odds against us;

we glance, and look at each others' faces.

Knowing what would become of us,

we stand there; proudly accepting our fate.

Giving their life on the line, to protect one another.

Pouring their heart and their strength into the scene,

fighting them one by one.

Each soldier, falling to the field,

quickly with haste, they move to the next.

At the day's end,

they look at the open plain.

Wreaking bodies, and rotting corpses.

Overcoming the challenges, they sigh in releif,

knowing a true friend,

layed down their life for them today.


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This is beautiful, Ant! I am touched by your kind words to myself and our whole group. This is why we have been friends for a decade and will remain friends for hopefully many years to come.

Posted: Jul 8, 2008

Author Comment:

I hope so to ;)
I couldn't wish for a better group of people to be with

that is very nice and awwww u through in drak corpses and bodies for me

Posted: Jul 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol

thxs budd. war broithers till the end >=)

Posted: Jul 8, 2008

Author Comment:

hehe

Nice one, Ant. :-)

Posted: Jul 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Thnx =]

lol figures tht u write a poem about durkin, mario, and cris its a battle

Posted: Jul 9, 2008

Author Comment:

lol, its for you to

Excellent piece of work. keep it up.

Posted: Aug 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you =]

This is Beautiful and very well written..great Job!!

Posted: Aug 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much! Glad you liked it =)

Wow,so strong poem.And...Its really wondefrul.
...knowing they true friend
layed down their life for them

today.
So beautiful and touchy!
:)

Posted: Aug 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much ^-^

this one is really cool...like the visual of the battlefield...and true friendship:)

Posted: Aug 19, 2008

Author Comment:

hehe ty! =)

That was really good

Posted: Aug 28, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks :)

O_O
A brilliant piece of work!>_

Posted: Sep 12, 2008

Author Comment:

hehe ty ^-^



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