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My Sweet Lily

Poem By: Ant
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For my good friend, Sarah View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 16, 2008    Reads: 69    Comments: 7    Likes: 4   


My Sweet Lily

My sweet lily, with beauty so radiant;

an angel with comfort, a friend everlasting.

Her soothing smile, like a new morning dawn;

a heart so pure,  like a sweet love song.

A girl that moves, so swift and light,

a dove that takes its very first flight.

My sweet Lily, a good best friend;

I love you like a sister,

until the end.


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Comments:

aww, u r my big brother I never had. It's so sweet. thank you soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much. LYLAB

Sarah

Posted: Jun 17, 2008

Author Comment:

hehe yw ^-^ LYLAS

Okay i love this poem!! I think it's really good! Keep writing and let me know when something new is posted!

Kara

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

Author Comment:

lol thnx; i will ;)

I loved it! It was so beautiful :)

Posted: Jul 3, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks so much, tht means alot ^-^

Simply WOnderful as always!! =)

Posted: Aug 14, 2008

Author Comment:

^-^ glad you liked it

she's lucky =]

I really wish you guys will be happy for long =]
don't let anyone take your love away. ever .

nice XD

Posted: Aug 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Hehe, thanks. That really does mean alot. I hope we are to ;)
Thanks for reading and commenting =D

Aww, very sweet.

~DarkFairy~

Posted: Aug 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks ^-^

I loved this poem! It is my most favorite of ur poems that I have read.

Posted: Aug 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Hehe thank you =D
Glad you liked it



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