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Submitted: Jun 30, 2008    Reads: 55    Comments: 9    Likes: 4   


~ No Comment ~

Dull pictures paint the wall,

a useless peice of art.

Pointless meanings,

an unsatisfying taste.

Words gone unspoken,

not visible to the naked eye.

Jumping out at you,

a little ball of black.

Emerging from its center,

little shards of glass.

Little boys riding,

on their tricycles down the road.

The sun painted blue,

and the grass painted yellow.

Birds flying in the sky,

a swirl of purple is their color.

Imagination is the only inspiration,

leading my way into this scene.

Everything turned differently,

where up is down and in is out.

A place where life is death,

and darkness is the light.

Confusion entwined,

into each brush stroke.

Two words that only come to mind;

"No Comment."


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lol, i like that image. ^^

Posted: Jul 24, 2008

Author Comment:

=P

well i'm not gonna leave 'no comment'. hehe, told u i'm not funny. anyways great poem!

L ♥

Posted: Jul 27, 2008

Author Comment:

lol dave said he we going to do that hehe =P

no comment.. haha j/k... I like it alot,it flows very well!!

Posted: Aug 14, 2008

Author Comment:

lol thank you! =)

WOOOW,this is AMAZING!!!!I like it very very much.
:)

Posted: Aug 19, 2008

Author Comment:

lol really? thought it was kinda strange, but I'm glad you liked it ^-^

Abstract art, I myself as an artist don't even get it sometimes.

~DarkFairy~

Posted: Aug 19, 2008

Author Comment:

lol thank you =)

This is really a piece of art! I like all of the wacky beautiful desciptions. One of my favorites!


Johnston C.

Posted: Aug 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, glad you liked it! =D

I really liked this one.
its pretty unique :D
good job!

Posted: Aug 25, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you :D

I love that poem. Please tell me when you update more poems.

Posted: Aug 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Hehe thanks, I will ;)

I like this porem! Its great. You are awsome! Keep up the good work

Posted: Sep 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, I will ;-)



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