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Submitted: Jun 25, 2008 Reads: 175 Comments: 41 Likes: 23
Through My Eyes
Through my eyes I see you.
Standing there all alone,
peacefully and quietly;
like nothing can go wrong.
The whole world spinning,
revolving around you.
Nothing else matters to me;
nothing, except you.
You gave me the sun by morning,
you gave me the moon by night,
you gave me your friendship forever,
like love at first sight.
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What am I supposed to say to you...? I can't say great poem, cause that means nothing..nothing at all. I can't say I love it, cause thats stupid and predictable.Speechless, yes. I'm sure there is other girls that make u happy, come on. grrr, i hate u, lol. idk, I feel loved, special.... and stupid for babling to u. Love you sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much. ( srry about the comment )
Posted: Jun 27, 2008
ANTHONY THIS IS SUCH A GREAT POEM!!!!! i am like speechless. this is wonderful!!
kara
Posted: Jun 28, 2008
that is very good. you have wonderful flow and rythm.
L ♥
Posted: Jun 28, 2008
this is very good, i really like the imagery, it's so strong and pulls the reader right in there! well done!! =)
Posted: Jun 29, 2008
hi! ant. friendship can of course make everything seem brighter. and u've discovered a true friend. and along came peace. wow! well done, my friend. lol. ;-)
Posted: Jun 30, 2008
Beautiful rhymes. I have to say this was an enjoyable read and very inspiring indeed. I liked it :)
Posted: Jul 3, 2008
This rocks!
Posted: Aug 11, 2008
This is crazy good!
And crazy amazing!
♥ it!
Posted: Aug 12, 2008
Wow..Amazingly wonderful!! i love it!! Awesome Job!!
Posted: Aug 14, 2008
This really a beautiful poem, and I really don't read poetry that often, I have never been a big fan of poetry, but this...this is wonderful.
Posted: Aug 15, 2008
I really like this. Especially the part where you said "you gave me your friendship forever, like love at first site". *sigh* That just made this poem for me. ^^d Short and sweet and so meaningful. Love it.
Posted: Aug 16, 2008
Hei!
I really enjoyed reading this poem. And the word beautiful would be not so enough to describe this poem( in my opinion)
'I like it' voted!!XD
Take care always^_^
Posted: Aug 16, 2008
Amazing! Ant Your doing amazing. Keep your work up and you'll grow into something even better then imagined.!
DD xD
Posted: Aug 17, 2008
I dont know what to say.Antoher so beautiful poem!Just keep it up.You write really wonderful!
:)
Posted: Aug 19, 2008
Hey, I like this one a lot, and you're good at non-rhyming poetry :)...
Posted: Aug 19, 2008
that's really good. I can see you care much 4 the person the poem is for.
Posted: Aug 19, 2008
For getting writer's block through it, you did really well at pulling it to a smooth close. Great job.
~DarkFairy~
Posted: Aug 19, 2008
ikd y u say ur bad at this this it is a great poem
Posted: Aug 19, 2008
......
Im speechless like totally lol
Posted: Aug 19, 2008
Its short, which makes it less boring and easier to go all the way through.
I really like it , everything about it just- WORKS =]
I also adore the picture =P lol
this was really good :]
keep it up !
aaaaa I luv reading your stuff ^^
Posted: Aug 20, 2008
This is so sweet! I loved it!! Make sure you keep me posted when you have new things up!!
Posted: Aug 20, 2008
i like it :]
its real, its meaningful, and it so simple yet so strong.
its amazing to see how a friend can become your whole world. and the love you have for each other grows more and more everyday. its such a sincere love because you know they love you for you and you love them right back for accepting that. keep up the good work dude!
Posted: Aug 22, 2008
Awww! I like it :D
Posted: Aug 22, 2008
This is really beautiful! 0_0 I love your poetry!! I'm going to read more! ^-^ Your an awesome poet!
Posted: Aug 22, 2008
This really sounds like it means something to you. Can you tell me: does it, or am I just projecting onto it? XXX
Posted: Aug 25, 2008
absolutly.... amazing. you are a very talented writer. I really wish i had somthing better to say, but this poem took all the words away.
lol
Posted: Aug 25, 2008
Very Nice
Posted: Aug 26, 2008
Your poem has touched a place in my heart where a very special friend dwells. I wish that I could share this wtih her but, it is now not possible!
They say that friendships are and can last forever! Do everything humanly possible to keep them close to you, even if you have to say, "I'm sorry, I was wrong"
Posted: Aug 26, 2008
Wow!! That was great!! Super work!!
Keep it up!!
Posted: Aug 26, 2008
That poem is amazing and sweet. Keep writing stuff like that.
Posted: Aug 27, 2008
I thought the flow was pretty good. I liked the last couple lines the best. Seemed kind of simple but it was still good.
Posted: Aug 28, 2008
Hi, Ant!
This is Carlet la Lovecraft. I love your staff and I want to see more of that. Got time check mine. Tell me what you are thinking.
Merci beaucoup
Carlet
Posted: Aug 31, 2008
how sweet :]
that was lovely
Posted: Sep 1, 2008
This is amazing, I love it. The imagery is so amazing, I went completly blank at the end. Absolutely captivating.
Posted: Sep 5, 2008
Keep writing your poems they're great. I had that feeling about someone once,it never worked out that good.Ihope you have better luck!
Posted: Sep 6, 2008
OMG I LOVED THAT! IT WAS SO CUTE!
Posted: Sep 6, 2008
i don't know what to say that hasn't been said, so im just letting you know i read and liked it.
Posted: Sep 7, 2008
oh-my-wow! fantastic!!! the last four lines are perfect..my fave definetly...amazing read :)
Posted: Sep 9, 2008
Wow, you have a lot of fans. Loved the powm, last few lines were... powerful. Brilliantly done.
Posted: Sep 11, 2008
Im speechless because when I like someone, i feel that way! keep up the good work!
Posted: Sep 14, 2008
woa dude this is so bloody brilliant im not suprized people love it hehe ciao! keep it up !
Posted: Oct 15, 2008
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