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She loves

Poem By: Avril360
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Tags: love, nothing, else

she loves all these things. will she have to give them up for a boy...... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 2, 2008    Reads: 56    Comments: 7    Likes: 0   


She loves to climb trees every day

She loves to go outside ande play

She loves the way she combs her hair

She loves the fact that she never gets scared

She loves when it's cold outside

She loves when she picks a fight

She loves the boy she is staring at

She loves him and his black hat

She loves her mom and dad, so what

She loves that his is an emo/punk

She loves to hang out with him

She loves to slide down again

She loves when it's just them two

She loves when they are at the zoo

She hates the fact she gives everything up

but then her boy just says, so what


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Comments:

That was a really good poem Allison! Though some of it didn't make sense with the whole story, and it seemed like you were just trying to get the sentence to rhyme. But I enjoyed reading this! Keep writing:)

Posted: Apr 2, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx zo!

wow, this is an amazing poem!! I thought it was really good! Great work! :)

Posted: Apr 5, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you!!! check out more of my writing!!! i'd appreciate it

WOW! Amazing poem! I loved it!

Posted: Apr 5, 2008

Author Comment:

check out the mysterious wonder!!! it's much better!!!

good job this poem rocks!

Posted: Apr 5, 2008

Author Comment:

check out the mysterious wonder!!! it's much better!!!

Again, totally AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted: Apr 11, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx!!!! check out my other writing!!!

really really awesome poem it rocks !!!!!!!!

Posted: Apr 11, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks!!! if you haven't you should check out my poem 'The mysterious wonder' and my short story 'over the rainbow' ('over the rainbow' has almost nothing to do with rainbows!!!!)

this is really great!! keep up the good words :D

Posted: Apr 21, 2008

Author Comment:

read my other poems and my novel "the hidden gate"!!!! they are also good!!!



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