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The Annoying boy

Poem By: Avril360
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this is a true story about a boy in my math class...... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 7, 2008    Reads: 61    Comments: 11    Likes: 0   


That annoying boy, I can’t stand him

he calls me emo I can’t assist

I can not tell him that it’s true

because if I did I’d be a lying fool

he is always talking he never stops

I just tell him “do I have slits upon my wrists, I think not”

he calls me weird everyday

I can not stand him, I just sit and sway

he drives those comments in my head

I feel like just going to bed

I’m always tired when he is talking to me

I always feel like I want to scream

the teacher never hears him talk

the way he is not a rock

the kind of rock that never talks

I wish always that he would stop

I run and run when class is over

then I feel this way no longer


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Comments:

Maybe, move you seat in the classroom.

Posted: Apr 8, 2008

Author Comment:

the teacher wouldn't let me

this is really good!! do you tell the boy how you feel?? or ask him to leave you alone? school's tough, and always hard to deal with! hope you figure it out!

Posted: Apr 8, 2008

Author Comment:

yes i ask him 2 stop and say i'm not emo!!!! but then he just keeps doing it!!!!! but yea!!! school is tough!!! thanks for the comment!!! i hope 2 figure it out 2!!!!!

If you are Emo and he call's you Emo then who cares what he says. Be proud of what and who you are. Every person is an individual and those who cannot see past their own short sitedness are not worth hearing. Keep writing. Its what makes us whole.

Posted: Apr 10, 2008

Author Comment:

i'm not emo..... that's what i meant was he calls me emo but i'm not....thanks for the comment though

That guy is a pest, why don't you punch him in the face and shut his a** up? Lol, tell your teacher he is a motherfucker and he keeps pissing you off and demand to be moved or boycott the class.

Posted: Apr 12, 2008

Author Comment:

funny. i don't think i could boycott the class.... but i could tell the teacher!!! good thoughts!!!! thanx!!

Ugh! I hate boys like that. The annoying type who think that they're right about everything. Absolutely cannot stand them. But really, I would just let him talk. If he wants to make a fool of himself, by all means. He doesn't know what he's talking about. It is frustrating when the teacher doesn't help out, believe me I know how it feels. I've dealt with many guys like this.

Poem-wise, I liked it. I found the flow a little choppy but the meaning was clear. I really enjoyed it despite its meaning. Well done.

-SnowQueen

Posted: Apr 13, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx!! check out my novel.... i'll update it in a little bit!!! but check out the first chapter.

You have conquered his ignorance with your words above..send him a copy..perhaps he will realise that he is to dumb to understand its message..lol

Posted: Apr 19, 2008

Author Comment:

i would do that.... if i had his email..... but i could print it out and bring it to school. good advice

Avril...good poem! I like it very much. Regarding Mister Nuisance... I think he likes you. What I've learned is that when a boy teases a girl (and he knows that he is vexing her) it's a sign that he has a crush on her. It's all about body language!! That's just my opinion... don't kill me -throws up hands to protect myself-

Posted: May 2, 2008

Author Comment:

*barfs in toilet* WHAT!!! DAVID HERMANSSEN DOES NOT LIKE ME!!!! *laughs while barfing in toilet*

that is so funny cus there are these kids at my school that make cutting gestures at me in the hall way. it is sssoooo annoying.
Lydia_xxxx

Posted: May 11, 2008

Author Comment:

i know... a couple kids in my Spanish class also think i'm emo just because I wear this jacket with skulls everyday... so they also call me emo. i think they mean goth or something but i'm not goth either. so i have weird experiences with emo and goth. i wish people would stop calling me those names though.... if they only knew how i felt.... *looks into sky at Jesus and prays*

I think taht you poem is very good. I can totally relate. There are definently some people that when they talk, I ignore every word they say.

Posted: May 22, 2008

Author Comment:

yes, i understand, but that isn't the point in this poem

Great write, who knows maybe he likes you...but if he's driving you nuts, ask to move away from him.

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

i already moved..... we moved seats 1 1/12 months ago... that's when i wrote this poem.... but no.... he likes a girl named Katie thank god!

I like this.
I like the detail.
And i have the same situation :(
i just told on him, even though usually im not a clipe.
He was just so effin annoying :)

Posted: Jun 14, 2008

Author Comment:

i knoe da type



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