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The Mysterious wonder

Poem By: Avril360
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this is about a girl who faught cancer while trying to have a baby,but in the end......... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Mar 21, 2008    Reads: 63    Comments: 10    Likes: 2   


She had wonder, she could never fulfill

Her parents told her to be thrilled

about what she had done

and about what battle she had won

she battled cancer, to and fro

she wondered if they would let her go

from the hospital, so it seems

she always said chase your dreams

too bad she didn't do it

she just couldn't, push through it

she wanted to be an artist

but too bad, she broke her promise

she was pregnant, at sixteen years old

too bad she let the baby go

she was weeping as hard as can be

she always cried herself to sleep

from then on, she was sad as could be

too bad she never woke up from her deep dark sleep

her parents sobbed for hours and hours

too bad they killed themselves to lay, and follow

their precious daughter, who had die

and in their grave, they cried


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Comments:

omg, this is sooo sad!!! But i still enjoyed it very much! great poem! :)

Posted: Apr 5, 2008

Author Comment:

i thank you

Very Very sad but good and well written bravo!

Posted: Apr 7, 2008

Author Comment:

gracias!!!!! check out my new/latest poems!!! they aren't as sad/emotional but they are still pretty good!!!!

That was short but AWESOME!!!
keep up the good work,
Keepers River

Posted: Apr 11, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you!!! check out 'over the rainbow' my short story... if you liked this you will probably like that too

oooh, such a sad and dark poem with so much going on till the tragic ending. A tragedy from woe to go, but nicely written.

Posted: Apr 17, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you!!!!! if you like that you will probably like my short story series!!!! also check out my other poems too!!!

Within the flowing fonts of sorrow

thoughts meander drunkenly awakened

Disturbing images of past

Flow into words..the die is cast

You feel and live emotions true

as if those images are of you

And yet you bear anothers cross

to bring their tale to others eyes.

A noble thought, an aim with truth

taken from lifes rich pages

Spreading word of tales unheard

from within the minds eyes cages..

Posted: Apr 18, 2008

Author Comment:

ok......

That my sweet was a compliment to the clear cut way you presented an emotive story..in short- very nicely done...lol..OK!

Posted: Apr 18, 2008

Author Comment:

oh... i get it now!!! thanxx for the compliment!!!! if you like this you'll like my short story series 'over the rainbow' 'from the start' 'death to death' and 'the very last' and my novel 'the hidden gate'!!! thanxx again for the compliment!!!

I agree with seesawmae. its pretty sad. Still a good read though.

Posted: Apr 22, 2008

Author Comment:

ok thanxx!!! be sure to check out my novels and my other poems too!!! thanxx again for the comment!!!!!!

Broken hopes
Broken dreams
All not realised
and only for Death
It seems.

Awesome job!1

Posted: Apr 22, 2008

Author Comment:

THANXXX!!!! i appreciate the comment!! be sure to read my other writing too!!!!

that is like heart breaking. take care.
Lydia_xxxx

Posted: May 11, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you.. i just kind of think of things that could be happening to people or something... my poems just come to me and i get on the computer right away and type.

hi! avril. this is tragic but inevitable. ;-)

Posted: May 14, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you soo much



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