The Solar Judge

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Poem By: B Leaf
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Tags: tanka, judgement, solar, b, leaf, sun

This is my first Tanka style poem. View table of contents...

Submitted: Jul 1, 2008 Reads: 47 Comments: 3 Likes: 2

The Solar Judge
Fear sees all my lies
Mistaken words invisible
Sun meets father time
Time bomb nearing molten death
Judgment passed won’t forgive past.

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Comments:

Blood Rose Dragon

sounds like armageten. very erie yet it is most likly
true.

Posted: Jul 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks hope you enjoyed it just trying a different styles out and will just experiment in time to come.

bubbly

hi! bleaf. prophetic. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jul 1, 2008

Author Comment:

hehe thanks :) lol

Ichi Clairvoyance

I really liked the way you worded this poem. I also think that the shortness of it emphasized the point that you were trying to make. ^-^ Good job.

Posted: Jul 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks I usually write much longer poems and I had been looking into different types of poetry for my challenge. I figured hmm why not try some different types of poetry that I am not used to as well. This is the result and I am happy to here that you were a fan of it.