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Nevermind

Poem By: Bachi
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Submitted: Jan 5, 2008    Reads: 54    Comments: 2    Likes: 3   


Why do they pretend to care?

Nevermind

You don't care either.

Nevermind

Don't pretend I know you don't.

Nevermind

Leave me like the others have.

Nevermind

You already left.

Please someone see and hear me.

And make me stop saying

Nevermind


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Comments:

I liked it, shows reality. Reminds me a lot of me. Good poem.

Posted: Jan 6, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks everyone says im a good writer not a poet

Lionheart
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never mind...... i say that way too often....... also "whatever".... Guess i kind of show resentment toward people trying to help me....
Nice piece, it touched me. It was well constructed, putting emphasis on 'never mind' very well. I really liked this poem, if there was a place to put favourites i would put this there.

Posted: Jan 7, 2008



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