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Cheater.

Poem By: Bibliophile
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Tags: gunshot, cheater, rain

She should've never done it, and now she has to pay for it... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 21, 2008    Reads: 36    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   


Cheater
By: Kristyn D’Angiolillo
 
By the rain-soaked window I sat,
Watching the drops fall down with a splat.
And dreading his coming with fear,
Trying to hold back a pressing tear.
 
Finally he came with a loud bang,
And brought me from my thinking,
That maybe he just wouldn’t come.
Now my heart beats like the pound of a dream.
 
As his footsteps draw nearer and nearer,
My mind becomes clearer and clearer.
I know I won’t last through the day,
If he has anything to say.
 
As he entered the room, I stood,
Rigidly standing, stiff as wood.
No hello as a sign of greeting,
On the day of this grave meeting.
 
He gave me a cold, hard stare,
The anger in his eyes, bright as a flare.
No words did he speak to me,
And I knew, never again would I be free.
 
The thunder rolled outside,
And he was across the room in one long stride.
The tears poured freely from my eyes,
As I tried to stifle my piercing cries.
 
He held me up by my neck,
And I was out cold with one sharp deck.
From then I remember no more,
As I lay on the hardwood floor.
 
Forever more I will wish,
That I had never been so foolish.
For a few stolen hours of harmless fun,
My life was lost to the shot of a gun.


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Comments:

Like all the other stuff you write, I almost see this as a story, a very sad image, except your imagery seems so beautiful when expressed in words. I love how the weather matches the mood. Great job!

Posted: Apr 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Aww thanks! I was almost afraid that people wouldn't be able see what was really happening, so that's why I made the title Cheater, hoping that they would see through the vagueness of it. I'm really glad you liked it!
Your Book Loving Friend,
bibliophile



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