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Can I Keep You?

Poem By: BrokenSilences
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Tags: heart, love, saved, happy

About holding your treasure close...How you should no matter what...=P View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Mar 14, 2008    Reads: 43    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


 

we are all given a gift from God
some say a miracle, some say a treasure
well, I believe I've found my gift
and I want you to be mine forever
Can I keep you?
we all have had a shooting star
a tiny glimpse of heaven that quickly fades away
but I don't want another shooting star
all I want now is for you to stay
Can I keep you?
someone as gorgeous and loving as you
can only be found in a lullaby story
such an amazing masterpiece of God
who'd even hold me close in my time of mourning
Can I keep you?
I can't believe what I did to deserve you
what it could've been that you ever saw in me
because I know that with a stupid, loveless heart
someone very special has to hold the key
Can I keep you?
I know you'd never hurt me and never break a promise
I know you're the one who I see in the stars
you are my own angel, the only one for me
someone worth trusting with my slowly healing heart
Can I keep you there?


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Comments:

awwwww!!!!! i looooooved it!!!!!!!
its so sweet and light and happy!! it makes me warm and fuzzy on the inside XD

Posted: May 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks mucho AGAIN Alice! glad it makes you feel warm and fuzzy on the inside!!
Broken Silences =)

yay my poem is lovely!!

Posted: Jun 17, 2008

Author Comment:

its cuz i love you so!



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