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Poem about being alone in the dark and finally seeing the light like an eclipse...the light obviously meaning LOVE...How it opens your eyes to how important you are to people... >.< View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Feb 18, 2008    Reads: 44    Comments: 4    Likes: 0   


Always hiding away from the world

Always hiding away from the sun

Never destined to meet new people

Never to find my only one

Like the moon, I hide from the day

And like the sun, they shine and glare

I'll never be as good as them

I am doomed and no one cares

I wanted to leave this life behind

And then I stepped into the light

My angel has come and appeared before me

Telling me I need to fight

He came to me and said with care,

"You are to stay until the dawn

And later you may choose your fate

But I promise by then, you won't be gone"

I stayed and waited until the dusk

And saw my brother beyond the sky

Shining all his light for me

Begging me to stay alive

Now I know that angels come

Their lives are thrown beyond the stars

Holding out lives as long as they can be

Healing our broken, bruising hearts


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Nothing like those GOD angels

Posted: Feb 18, 2008

Author Comment:

yep. =D

aaaw. I like this too. And for some reason, I relate to it! :D I really like smilies, I think you'll come to know that. I really liked this poem too!

Posted: Feb 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks i'm glad u do...Who doesn't like smies baisi?

Found this rather moving. Holding out until the dawn.
Thanks for sharing. Ricky.

Posted: Feb 20, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks a lot i'm glad u like it...=)

Wow....amazing...it surely touched me...it made me realise that at some point in our lives we long to meet that angel that is meant specially for each one of us!!! Lovely and simple way of writing....

Posted: Feb 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks I've only seen it one way up until now...I never really liked it before, thanks again I am SO glad you liked it...=P



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