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Questioning how long she will need to miss him before it stops hurting.....XP At first just thinking that they've distanced themselves and then finding out how much damage it had done to them... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Mar 15, 2008    Reads: 53    Comments: 4    Likes: 1   


 

Just how many times
Will you walk away
Leaving me alone here
In the pouring rain
How many more times
Can I feel your hand
As you're holding mine
How can we understand
Just how many days
Will the scent of you linger
As I long for the feel of
Your hair between my fingers
How many more minutes
Can I turn into hours
As I still hold on
And sing our song in the shower
How many heartbeats
Can be left without you
When everything I see
Was everything we would do
Just how many more tears
Can be falling down my cheek
When I look at you there
Noticing we no longer speak
And as I look down
I hide the scathes on my wrist
And quickly turn away
You'd want so much to see this
So for just how long
How much longer does this torture last
Two months later missing you
Can't stop thinking about our past
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Comments:

very very good!!I liked it very much ;-)

Posted: Mar 19, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks glad you like it... =P

Some distances don't melt. Some hurts don't go away. Very touching. And extremely heart-warming. ;-)

Posted: Apr 30, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks bubbly! I am so glad you enjoyed (and understand)it that means SO much!!
Broken Silences =)

aww, so beautiful and sad. I really like the way you wrote it, it all fits perfectly together! You don't know me, hi, my name is Steph, lol. Just thought I'd check you some of your stuff. I gotta say, I love it so far! haha, keep it up.
Steph:)

Posted: Apr 30, 2008

Author Comment:

hi steph...i'm really glad you gave my stuff the time of day! i'm really glad you like it, it's important that people actually understand what the point of my writing is...You are Gif-ted!
Broken Silences =)

STILL thinking bout him ehhhhhh?????
i love you my silly jilly bean i will see u the next time you go up to our ( second) house the cottage rox!!!
love ya
* i have wings*
- hailey_bailey!

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

silly goose...love ya!



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