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"I Just Made the Worst Mistake of my Life"

Poem By: BrokenSilences
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Tags: hurt, pain, loss

"You never know what you have, and how lucky you are...until she's gone." View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 28, 2008    Reads: 53    Comments: 3    Likes: 1   


he holds his head in his hands

and watches as the tears fall to his feet

the puddle reflecting his destroyed face

fades to hers saying, "I thought you loved me"

all he wants to do is take her hurt away

her pain is tearing him up inside

and all he is thinking as he watches her leave is-

"I just made the worst mistake of my life"

he knows to late that theres nothing he can do

that there is no way to take back everything he said

how it'll be too hard to look nto her eyes

that he'll never be able to hold her close again

he wants to hold her in his arms

he wants her to call him just to say, "Goodnight"

but all that he wants, he'll never get back

"I just made the worst mistake of my life"

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Comments:

Great poem, I know how you feel when your wrongful actions harm those you love.

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm really glad you understand it...Thanks Rocky!

hi! bs. his regrets can never set the wrong right. his one mistake'll leave him craving for her forever. loved it. keep up the good work. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks bubbly! =) you always know just what to say!

wow silly jilly thats good!!!
i luvaduv you !!!!!
wow i cant wait till i c u again i miss you
hows foopah and everyone
well people who read her poems !!!!!
SHE GOT EDITED INTO THE WORLDS GREATEST POEMS BOOK !!!!
yea she did uh huh!!!!!!!
SHE ROCKS SO READ ALL OF HER POEMS!!!!!
i love you !! ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
=^-^=

Posted: Aug 24, 2008

Author Comment:

checka checka yeah!



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