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If I Wrote a Fairytale...

Poem By: BrokenSilences
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Type of poem with a "my" opinion...What i think of as the "perfect world"...kinda anyway...more like a glimpse, i guess... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Feb 17, 2008    Reads: 33    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


If I wrote a fairytale

Everyone would have a heart

All of us would be together

And never need to part

In my story, the fires burned

But not with hatred or from scars

The ashes danced a thousand miles

And finally became the stars

Those stars above the skies above

Would always sing a song

Their perfect tune would hold us here

The moon would hum along

The ocean's waves that shock the land

With its sudden, crashing, tides

Would become calm and content

Its lovely dance would mesmerize

In such a perfect, loving world

None of us would be alone

Everyone'd be calm and pure

This amazing place we'd call our home...


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Can i be in that fairy tale sounds wonderfull....Loved the way you told it like a rhyming story great....Til Later Juliet

Posted: Feb 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks a lot I'm glad u like it...=)

nicely done! i think we all wish life was a pleasant little fairy tale, eh?
lovely job. the poem had a sweet and light feel to it. two thumbs up ^^

Posted: Apr 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks again! Love the comments by the way...Thanks Thanks Thanks Thanks!!
Broken Silences =)



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