mAsoCHiStic

Random First Lines: Mrs. McLeod looked at her daughter with funny eyes while Miss McCafferty spoke to her with a quiet voice- she... : Young Adult » Read

Poem By: BrokenSilences
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Tags: masochistic, death, suicide, depression

pain and hurt from losing someone you love and what it could do to you...found it today and finished it. Enjoy... View table of contents...

Submitted: May 9, 2008 Reads: 46 Comments: 2 Likes: 1

mAsoCHiStc

wHy is it tHat i wAnt to huRt

whaT is So haRd to UndErstaNd

thAt i Put mYseLf thRouGh aLl tHis pAin

beCauSe I nEveR haVe a loVinG haNd

i KnoW thiS FEelNg i hAve nOw

i'Ve feLt iT mAny TimEs bEfoRe

aT fiRst yOu toOk thAt pAin aWay

aNd thEn You gAve mE So mUch More

so TodAy i wAnt to Feel tHe paiN

i taKe aNd looK at mY litTle fRieNd

hE sMilEs aNd sAys, "nOw iS tHe tiMe"

He marKs My Skin aNd bRinGs My eNd

i Feel MuCh bEtter bUt it wOnt sTop

tHe bLoOd I sEe woNt Go awAy

iT caScaDes aNd fAlls oNto thE fLOor

iT seEms As iF tHis is mY laSt dAy

sO as My viSioN staRts to Blur

aNd aS i lOok inTo yoUr eYEs

i WaNt to sMiLe aNd saY to yOu

"witHouT yoU, i doNt waNt to Be aLive"

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Comments:

xpurexpoisonx006x

This is really good :)
I love the rhyme skeeme and the message.

xx

Posted: May 12, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks! I'm glad you like it! =)

my eyes!!! :) a little hard to read, but i got the messeage, i like the last part, when you look into his eyes and said w/out him you don't want to be alive. it kinda brings in the connection to the reader. good job.
.... always lexie.

Posted: May 19, 2008