The "Feet" Poem

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Poem By: BrokenSilences
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Tags: broken, love, hurt, pain, take it back, notebook, prince, feet

sort of a torn poem...about remembering the good times of something that went violently downhill...Whatever, right?
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Submitted: Jun 5, 2008 Reads: 29 Comments: 3 Likes: 3

we used to be the TWO in one

that tried to CATCH the shooting stars

the best friends that GOD has seen

but such good times seem much TOO FAR

we'd LISTEN to your "hick music"

and always to Our BROKEN Song

Our "dance" would be my FEET on yours

but the life of "US" is way past Gone

sure, I'd say you were an ASS

and I would be your moody BITCH

but at the END, looking back

the reasons why were always SHIT

that's really all I HAVE to say

so don't give me all those TORTURED looks

if you really wanted a HAPPY ENDING

you'd dump your "PRINCE" and read my NOTEBOOK

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Emmywashere

I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE it... although this isnt the first that ive read it i am still in love with you and your poetry, keep writeing cause you are AWESOME

Posted: Jun 13, 2008