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To Daddy

Poem By: BrokenSilences
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changing things WAY up a bit...wrote this for my dad a couple years ago for fathers day...enjoy! View table of contents...

 

Submitted: May 9, 2008    Reads: 41    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


 
Daddy’s Day
 
You have put up with me
For fourteen *fun* years
You have never hit or screamed
Or caused me any tears
 
You were there to help
When I landed on my knee
You put a band aid on it
And told it not to bleed
 
Through all my nightmares
You said, “Everything’s alright
The monsters have all gone away
And won’t come back tonight”
 
You held my hand to cross the street
With Mommy years ago
You told me to stop growing
And how you love me so
 
So Daddy, I know
That with all these years, I can say
That you are the best Daddy I can wish for
And happy Father’s day!!!!


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Awwww!!! This describes a father-daughter relationship in avery lighhearted way! Good job!

Posted: May 9, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks a lot...happy to say he appreciated it when i gave it to him...
=)

hey you ur a great poem writer guess who i am???

u love me so and told me not to go that night at your birthday he was being gay!
we cried and cried that night but we didnt give up without a fight
we ruted for mommy to win on the phone and he told me to come home
he wanted to talk i wanted to walk .....
right out of his life that night
now i can say we are happier than ever although you are light as a fether i love you to death!!
oh yea and *i have wings*
Oh and fupah is my big brother!
katina is my sexy pla mate (no homo)
and you are my girl for life i love you to death ?
and juvi is my wife!
oh and fupah's my husband hes hott!
haha lol call me some time
Oh and???.......
Misure Slinky Pants might give you a clue!
oh and the cottage!

Posted: Jun 5, 2008

Author Comment:

i love you, dearesttt!!!! thanks mucho!



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