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Without an After, There is no Before...

Poem By: BrokenSilences
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Tags: waves, dark, scared, worry

poem I wrote when I was on mah cruise last november...it's about waves..=P View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 7, 2008    Reads: 14    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   


Deep, cold, and no one's fool

Black, shining, dark and cruel

Crashing loud, imitating voices

Stolen souls, and fatal choices

Something that's gone is gone forever

When today and tomorrow are not together

They've taken all lights, sights, and sounds

They've forgotten all moments of sun and clouds

Something as precious as this little soul

Is victim to all these shadows of coal

Once it's gone, it's never more

And without an after, there is no before

Stolen, forsaken, weak with fright

Such intimidating waves are seen this night


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hi! bs. ur poem is so vibrant, i'm sure u had a terrific time on cruise. i liked the unusual lines, "When today and tomorrow are not together" and "And without an after, there is no before". well said. ;-)

Posted: Jun 9, 2008

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