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"Extra! Extra!"

Poem By: CanadianIdiot
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Tags: extra, world, mess, fix, death, die, crazy

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Submitted: May 8, 2008    Reads: 45    Comments: 5    Likes: 1   


“Extra! Extra!”

Extra! Extra! Read all about it!

Man finds his wife dead with throat slit!

Extra! Extra! Get in on the scoop!

Girl gets killed in a chicken coop!

Extra! Extra! The latest news!

Couple drops dead in a Church pew!

Extra! Extra! You won’t believe it!

Dr. Kirk Jackson Esquire dies after calling quits!

Extra! Extra! The world is a mess!

Man commits suicide when gas prices won’t go for less!

Extra! Extra! This is sign!

Fix the world and we’ll all be fine!


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Comments:

fins = finds, maybe. Interesting topic and style.

Posted: May 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Yes. I just noticed that. Thanks for pointing that out.

It just poppe into my head like all of the poetry I have been flushing out lately. The simple newspaper boy yell of "Extra! Extra!" came to mind and I built upon it.

Very cool structure.

Posted: Jun 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much.

hi! ci. all front page news and all scoops i can find in this poem. FLASH news in poetic form. hot. ;-)

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Rawkin', Bubbly. It is actually quite a fun thing to do for poetry; I suggest it to anybody!

so ture if anyone one cared this mess wouldnt happen if ONE will change it can make a difference.

Posted: Oct 31, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm glad we see eye to eye! Yes, if there is one person who steps forward and makes an action, then people will follow. It's like fighting against a corrupt government. If you step forward where the other people are afraid to, then they will take action by your side.

Ha. For some reason I found this poem funny. Ha ha ha!! Especially the chic in the chicken coop, did the chickens finally get tired of her crap and snap?

Posted: Nov 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Most likely. Would be an awesome death scene in a movie, by the way.



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