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Just some anger I need to release. Poem follows an A-A-B-B rhyme scheme.
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Submitted: Mar 21, 2008 Reads: 64 Comments: 6 Likes: 2
GET OUT! GO AWAY! YOU CAN'T TRY TO MAKE MY DAY! YOU'LL FAIL! JUST LIKE THAT! STOP PESTERING ME LIKE A DAMN BAT! STAY OUT! LEAVE ME BE! YOU WILL NOT BE ABLE TO SEE THE PAIN THAT DRIVES ME MAD! STOP YOURSELF AND I'LL BE GLAD! GIVE ME SOME ROOM! LET ME LIVE MY LIFE! ALL BEFORE DEATH GETS ME WITH HIS SCYTHE! YOU'RE A FOOL, IT IS SO! JUST LEAVE ME BE AND LET ME GO!
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this is good, nice anger! very well written!
Posted: Apr 6, 2008
A very angry piece, but it's good. I like it. Poetry written in a state of extreme emotion is always much more passionate and most of the time relatable. I like it.
~Kaori
Posted: Apr 17, 2008
Sometimes I see that kind of emotion in the people around me and sometimes I have days when I feel that way, but I try to keep going and pressing on. Great poem though.
Posted: Jun 9, 2008
Love it love it loveeeee IT. lol.
Posted: Jun 9, 2008
passion it gives me chills also gives a light into who u are someone similiar to me
Posted: Oct 31, 2008
I like it. Lotsa anger, big letters, its all good
-A
Posted: Nov 26, 2008
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