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Broken and Invisible

Poem By: Chicka19
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Love always means something... No matter how it ends up...
(no dont go all freaking out on me... I've never been in love) View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 24, 2008    Reads: 76    Comments: 7    Likes: 1   


I sit here still loving you.

And trying not to cry.

 

You broke my already fragile heart,

Yet you promised you wouldn’t.

 

I let you in even though everything inside of me

Was telling me not too.

But I thought I could trust you.

 

You said pretty words

And sent things to make me smile.

I fell in love.

 

Once you got inside me

You broke me.

Now I’m shattered.

 

There are pieces of me everywhere.

Thrown here and there.

Like you never even cared.

 

I still see you sometimes.

You look through me as though…

I’m invisible.

 

As though…

It all meant nothing…


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Comments:

Good work Mandy, it's true that some peope just need to get what they want and then loose interest and nmove on, that's life I suppose.

Posted: Aug 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Yes that is life... The bad side of life. Thanks Brian. =)

Great poem Mandy. I would like to add on to the previous comment and say that it is our duty to call those people heartless pigs.

Posted: Aug 25, 2008

Author Comment:

I agree! They are heartless pigs. =) Thanks Alek.

i really liked this poem it is almost like my feelings written for me

Posted: Aug 25, 2008

Author Comment:

You'll pull through whatever it is that makeing you broken and invisible. Just have faith. =)

Oh Mandy, wow this is fantastic, I can see how in touch you are with other peoples feelings.
oh, this is so touching.

Posted: Aug 25, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm glad you like it katie. I like this one a lot... It's one of my better ones I think. =)

a sad but beautiful poem . please keep believing , no matter how long it takes . forever love is out there i promise .
terry

Posted: Aug 26, 2008

Author Comment:

hehe thanks terry, though this isnt about my feelings... I just wrote it from others feelings. =)

you big cheat . ha ha ha

Posted: Aug 26, 2008

Author Comment:

hehe. =)

awe, it's so sad, but still so amazing! love is so complicated... lol! :)

Posted: Sep 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh it certainly is. Thanks Mae =)



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