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Come little flower

Poem By: Chicka19
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More of a metaphor type thing than anything else... Can you figure out what it really means? =) View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Sep 2, 2008    Reads: 92    Comments: 8    Likes: 4   


The cold heartless days are over little flower.

Come up from hiding and see the sun.

Shake out your petals and feel the warmth.

Breathe deeply again little flower.

 

Don’t be afraid of the cloud that makes a shadow.

Stand tall and proud little flower.

The darkness will soon pass over.

 

Forget the nights that seemed would never end.

Erase you memory of the cold snow that wanted to never melt.

For now, fill yourself with the warmth of a new day.

 

Take another breath little flower.

Don’t hide from your shadows.

Let your colors light the world.

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Comments:

I'd say it's about recovery.
It's also very beautiful.

Posted: Sep 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Yes it is. Thanks Peach. =)

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Rebirth.

Wonderfully written little sis.
I am glad you are better. ^^

Alex

Posted: Sep 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you big brother. It's a rebirth of sorts.... =)

it makes me think of a small animal or child that is recovering. and OH it is just SO Beautiful.

Posted: Sep 3, 2008

Author Comment:

hehe Thanks katie. You're close. Everyone is hitting dead on about recovery or "rebirth." =)

As I heard, you were going trough hard time about religion, but the Winder's over, and the Spring's back. Am I right?

Between, this is really cute poem. Like most of yours.

Posted: Sep 6, 2008

Author Comment:

It could be seen that way. But when I was writing it, I was thinking of a girl who was abused in some way, and she's finally done hiding... Thanks Alek =)

Loved it, thankyou for welcoming me in. Appritiate your writings!

-James,

Posted: Sep 7, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm glad you liked it. Anytime james! =)
~Mandy

i'd say something about recovery, after something bad took over someone's life, they're finally getting better and seeing the light, for what feels like the first time. but that's just what i'm thinking. Great poem, loved it! i think i've caught up on all your writing now... i loved all of it!

Posted: Sep 8, 2008

Author Comment:

You pretty much got it Mae. =) hehe yes I think you did catch up. =)

Wow...that was beautiful. Made me think of a friend of mine who is overcoming an addiction. Wonderful writing!

Posted: Sep 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Eresed. I'm glad you enjoyed it and Good Luck for your friend! =)

Beautiful Chicka, touching too - blends the pain of "hiding" and being trampled on with the triumph of finally being able to bloom. Well done.

Posted: Sep 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Anna =) I'm glad you got the meaning. =D
~Mandy



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