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My heart speaks more than I can ever say.

Poem By: Chicka19
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I got this idea from Punishment and Alice... I didnt hold back I just wrote... they arent my words... but my hearts... I was even surprised with what came from it... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 24, 2008    Reads: 45    Comments: 7    Likes: 4   


There’s a light inside of me,

That loves to shine.

But so easily dies.

And does so often.

 

There’s love in my heart,

Wanting to be shown,

But unable too.

 

The darkness in me,

Grows and weakens.

I hate it when it grows.

 

My arms are waiting,

To hug and hold.

But they stay at my sides.

 

My eyes are no longer lit.

Darkness smothered that light.

 

I want to come home!

I need you to be here!

There’s sorrow and pain inside my heart.

A need to laugh,

Yet I do nothing but frown.

 

I’m lost and unsure.

But God is with me.

So why am I sad?

He’s there isn’t he?

 

My path once so brightly lit,

Has turned to gray,

And is only getting darker.

 

Let my love shine again,

Let my light burst free.

Help me laugh and smile again.

I need you now, please!

 

Just come home to me…


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Comments:

awwww, this poem really touched me. wow, this is really great, the emotion really reaches out. great job!
Steph(:

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

Author Comment:

hehe. Thanks steph. Since emotion comes from the heart and my heart wrote this... I'm not surprised the emotion reached out. Thanks again. =) Mandy

Ooh just like the one I wrote that totally came from the heart. It scared people, but God helped my light shine through.

~DarkFairy~

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

Author Comment:

I know he'll help mine shine again. He always does. =) Mandy

awww so sad :(
but a very great poem. its amazing what happens to poetry when your heart is at work :) you've written a great poem mandy ^^ its great to hear that fellow writers are inspiring other writers to write. i dont know exactly how your idea came about, but i'm glad it did b/c you wrote a lovely, emotion-packed poem!
keep it up :)

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much Alice. I'm glad that you liked it... emotions are usually the key points in poetry arent they?? =) Mandy

Very sad poem Chicka19 :(. The narrator asks a lot of interesting questions about herself/himself and it really feels "real". The pain is easily described and thoughtfully detailed. Wonderful work Chicka!

Regan

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much Regan! I think you're the first one in a while to give me a... more informational and profesional outlook on my work. =) And please, my commenters usually call me Mandy. Probably because I end my comments with =) Mandy

Eric
(not registered user)

Really sweet Mandy.

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Eric =)

I added a new chapter to Kingdom of the Black Feather. If you love fantasy and love read this book pppppppppllllllleeeeeaaaaaaasssssssseeee! :'(

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Okay I'll take a look at it. =) Mandy

Nice work Mandy

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Brian. =)



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