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Take my hand and we'll fly

Poem By: Chicka19
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Tags: lost, found, happy, me, you

This is for everyone who feels alone and lost. Come with me on an adventure and find yourself again. =) View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 27, 2008    Reads: 59    Comments: 12    Likes: 6   


I know you’re hurting,

And I know you’re in pain.

But take my hand,

And we’ll fly away.

 

Your sorrows will be gone.

Your unhappiness will disappear.

Let yourself go,

And you’ll be free.

 

We’ll plunge into the water,

And swim with the dolphins.

We’ll soar into the sky,

And spread our wings.

 

Forget the darkness inside you.

I want to see you smile.

Laugh with me a while.

 

When the day is done,

Remember this moment.

Let yourself fill,

With the light that I gave you.

 

If ever you feel lost,

Alone and unsure,

Remember our day today.

And find yourself once again.


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Comments:

aww, this is so so so good! it's cute too! i love it, full of warmth and happiness and hope! great poem! :)

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks Mae, I'm glad you liked it. I was trying to come off with all that, plus some. =) Mandy

aww very heartwarming and inspiring :)
i wish i could fly... like actually have wings and fly... lol ok that was random lol
loved the poem ^^

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

lol I would love to have wings so I could fly. a light blue, almost a white color for mine. Thanks Alice. =) Mandy

Hehehe this actually made me feel better. It's been a long day. My parents are fighting and it brings me down when my dad is in one of his moods, he just makes hate him.

But then I read your poem and a small gentle, caressing breeze blew through and your words made me smile, and feel all good inside. Thanks sis, I'd fly with you any day :)

~DarkFairy~

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

awwwwwwww.... You put the biggest smile on my face when I read this! I'm so glad that this made you feel better. I hate it when my family fights too. Especially when my brother starts fighting with my mom. 'a small gentle, caressing breeze through'... that's poetry right there. it's such a pretty line. =) Thanks big sis and you're welcome. =) Mandy

BIG GANGSTER
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VERY SWEET MY DEAR CUTE ANGEL.

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

lol thank you. I'm glad you liked it. =D Mandy

You made me smile :) Feels great.... thanks

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm glad. I was hoping I could do that with this poem. =) You're welcome. =) Mandy

beautiful and inspirational, you've truly touched me. Thumbs up for you ma belle, this was brilliant!
Steph(:

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

awwwwwwww I feel special now! =) Thanks so much Steph. Your comments always make me smile. =) Mandy

Mandy :D your poems never fail to make me smile ^_^
there is this young sensitivity, full of aspiration and love.
thanks sweetie :) ~katie

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

You're so welcome Katie. I'm so glad that I can make you smile. Making you and all others of Booksie smile makes me smile. =) Mandy

Lionheart
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I write amazing comments to pieces like these because they are amazing in themselves!!!
Whenever i am at a beach with waves i love to dive head first into the rushing white head of a wave. It gives me a rush, like im getting away. This felt like that.
I have always wanted to fly... im sure you've heard that too many times already.

This is exactly what it means to escape from reality. To escape and have fun with someone close. Lets laugh at stupid things, and marvel at wonderful things like this poem.

Its funny how you are writing this with the intention of encouraging and motivating, when the reader finishes not feeling bad at all!!! My heart was beating hard from the thrill of being in the sky with you on a crazy ride.
I dont feel alone when i read something like this. I will sleep so UNBELIEVABLY beautiful tonight Mandy. I hope your gushing with giggles, because you should be the most brightest light right now. Shine for us all, light the way for us... please...
I know your smiling, its what helps others keep going. Come soon and i will definately take your hand. I will even fight Dark Fairy to be taken on the ride first HAhAhAHHAhahaHahHAHAHAhaHAhAhAh!!!!!
Can you imagine me and her fighting?!?!? HAhAhHAhAhAH!!!!

Everyone wants a piece of Chicka19 these days. And you continue to give a special piece of yourself to them all every day.
Take care, you have me smiling like a monkey on drugs HAhHAhAhAHhaHahAH!!!!
Thankyou so much for writing this. In times of darkness and when i feel like im stuck on the ground i will remember this.

[reaches hand out]

Posted: Jul 5, 2008

Author Comment:

I've always wanted to fly too. I sit outside and wish I could just jump into the sky. I'm always laughing at stupid things, so all you have to do is join me. =)
I dont want them to feel bad. I want them to feel happy! To know that I'm there, and that I wish I could just take them away. You shouldnt feel alone Lionheart, because I'm right here. Always will be. =)
I am gushing with giggles, I am smiling, and I do feel like I have the most brightest light inside me right now. I'll always shine for everyone on Booksie.
If ever you're down in the dumps, close your eyes and imagine us flying, laughing, and smiling. I hope it will help.
-Grabs your hand and flys away, you with me-

That was awesome mandy :)
May this bliss be never-ending
Take care ^^

Posted: Jul 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Alex. hope college is good. =)

I love it!! I can actually relate to it a bit. It's really awesome!!
Paws

Posted: Jul 21, 2008

Author Comment:

I think everyone can relate to it a little bit some way. I'm glad you did and that you enjoyed it. =)Mandy

Thx, i really needed that.

Posted: Aug 13, 2008

Author Comment:

You're welcome. Any time. =)
~Mandy

Thank you. It's funny, I've actually been going through some tougher things right now, and this right here really made me worry less about them. Isn't it great how a simple piece of writing can be so important? Well done madame, this is a pleasing piece. I look forward to more from you. Keep up the good work.

Posted: Aug 19, 2008

Author Comment:

You're welcome and thank you. I'm so glad that this piece did that for you. =)



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