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The rose that turned into a daffodil

Poem By: Chicka19
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A beauty in life
Simple pleasures
A bird in the sky
A flower basking in the sun.
~.~.~.~
Beauty never ends View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 10, 2008    Reads: 57    Comments: 5    Likes: 3   


It came to me one evening

A song that played

Inside of my head.

 

A never ending sound.

Truth in its words.

 

Emotions run through

Like water in the veins.

 

The secret love,

The ending pain.

A hidden joy.

 

A tune as sweet as the smell of a rose.

A color almost as rich.

 

Open the buds to the rain.

Bask in the simple pleasure of love.

 

The rose weeps

As the sun comes out.

It wilts.

 

Memories linger.

Never dead.

 

A saddened rose

Has turned into

A daffodil.


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this is such a heart touching poem.
simply beautiful and every line reaches deep.
thank you little sis

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Author Comment:

No. Thank you sissy. I'm glad you liked it. =)
~Mandy

Great work Mandy keep it up!

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Brian. Will do! =)
~Mandy

Even the smallest flower, rising from the endless sand desert, is an endless beauty. WoHooo for such a great poem, Mandy!

Posted: Aug 13, 2008

Author Comment:

I agree completely. Thanks Alek! =)
~Mandy

Sweet! I like it. I'm going to read more of your works when I get back home.

Posted: Aug 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you. Awesome and I hope you enjoy them. =)
~Mandy

wow, great poem! i loved reading it so much!!! :)

Posted: Sep 8, 2008

Author Comment:

hehe thanks Mae =)



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