Kind of a continuence of Take my hand and we'll fly. I had just one person in mind when I wrote this, but it's for everyone. Because it's all true for everyone. I mean it for everyone...
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Submitted: Jul 10, 2008
Reads: 51
Comments: 10
Likes: 5
Close your eyes
And breathe.
Let go of the worries
And your pain.
Hold out your hand
And grasp mine.
Together we’ll fly
Away from this.
Let me see the light
Come back into your eyes.
I’d like to see a smile
Light up your face.
We’ll go soaring
Through the clouds.
We’ll fly with the birds
And laugh until we haven’t any breath.
Trust in me always
I’ll try to light your way.
Trust in me always
And I’ll try to help you smile.
Don’t give up in me
I want to help forever.
Please don’t be afraid
To come to me.
My heart is always open
I’m always here.
Just let me help you
We’ll fight the Dark.
Take my hand again
And we’ll win.
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Comments:
awww mandy this is so inspirational and uplifting!! i loved this! it brought a HUGE smile to my face :) those last lines "take my hand again, and we'll win" - lovely! its like, energizing lol i dont know if that makes sense. like i read those last lines and i'm pumped like i can tackle anything, you know?
excellent poem :)
Posted: Jul 10, 2008
Mandy ^_^
'close your eyes and breathe'
it's as though the tension releases just reading those words.
To see the 'light' in peoples eyes is awesome isn't it?
always a pleasure to read you ^_^
~katie
Posted: Jul 10, 2008
hmmm ?
i don't know where to start
=O
to many
but my favourite line
::Don’t give up in me
I want to help forever::
Sweet Poem mandy
Love it
YAY !!
~Chumb bum~
Posted: Jul 10, 2008
What's this? Lyrics for soggy pop song?
Posted: Jul 11, 2008
Nice work Mandy
Posted: Jul 12, 2008
Lionheart
(not registered user)
You know, Charlie Chaplin had a saying: "A day without laughter is a day wasted."
Chicka19 should say: "A day without a smile is a day wasted." And how true!
I have not wasted this day, and i thankyou for that. Its a sunday morning and i hate sundays hahahahaah.
Lovely expressions, it slows down the mind a little. Have a wonderful day Mandy.
Posted: Jul 12, 2008
it's a nice thing to be happy amidst the insecurities, and it's nice to have someone faithfully by our side:) great poem
Posted: Jul 12, 2008
Stay happy mandy :)
Posted: Jul 12, 2008
Ooh now you have me thinking about God, such a wonderful thought to think about on Sunday, everyday for that fact!
~DarkFairy~
Posted: Jul 13, 2008
oh wow, this is so uplifting! i love it! I hope that the person you were thinking of while writing reads this, because it's amazing! Smile :)
Posted: Sep 8, 2008
