Random First Lines: I think it amazing that the Panda nickname stuck with him for almost 13 years, M“Ugh I need a... : Young Adult » Read

Welcome Visitor: Login to the siteJoin the site

What did I do?!

Poem By: Chicka19
Other


Tags: brother, scared, sad, pain

There is something going on right now with my brother and me... well he's a really good friend that I "adopted" as my brother... I'm scared I'm going to lose him. I care too much about him and if I lose him... I dont know what will happen.... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: May 22, 2008    Reads: 39    Comments: 4    Likes: 2   


What have I done?

To get that from you?

Why won’t you say it?

So I can fix whatever I’ve done?

 

I’m sorry but I’m sick of it.

I’m sick of the way you’ve been treating me,

This entire week.

 

I don’t know what I did,

But you’re acting like,

You don’t want to be around me.

 

You said you’d always be there,

You said you’d protect me.

But now you turn around and hurt me.

 

Then the scenario turns,

And you’re just like before.

The same brother.

Which are you?

 

The confusion is too much.

I’m not the only one who sees it.

Lindy does too.

So I’m not making it up.

 

I hate being like this with you.

I want to know what’s going on.

But you have to tell me that.

And I don’t want to say anything.

 

I’ve lost someone emotionally before.

I really don’t want to repeat that again.

Don’t make me go through that pain.

 

You don’t like to see me cry.

But you almost made me cry today.

What have I done?!

 

Please tell me.

I’m scared and I’m sad.

I just want to know what’s going on.

I don’t want to lose you too…


2

Email this story Email this story | Print Story Print Story | Add to reading list

Comments:

wow, this is sooo good!! You wrote it so well! Hopefully you can figure out things with your friend, try talking to him, that seems to work a lot! Great poem though, i enjoyed it a lot!

Posted: May 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks mae. well if this keeps up I have no choice other than to talk to him... It's just going to be tough. again thank you. =) Mandy

I wish you goodluck mandy.
Everything will be ok.

Posted: May 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks bro. I'm hoping so too. =) Mandy

i like this and i hope everything goes okie :)

Posted: May 23, 2008

Author Comment:

=D thanks kayla. I hope so too. =) Mandy

We all go through phases like this Mandy, just give him a bit of space and hopefully things will turn around for you

Posted: May 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Yes I know. and they already have, or so it seems. Thanks Brian. =) Mandy



Add Your Comments:

Your Name:

Spam protection control::

© Copyright 2008 Chicka19 All rights reserved. Chicka19 has granted theNextBigWriter, LLC non-exclusive rights to display this work on Booksie.com.

About | News | Contact | Your Account | TheNextBigWriter | Advertise

© 2008 TheNextBigWriter, LLC. All Rights Reserved. Terms under which this service is provided to you. Privacy Policy.