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Answer to B Walker's challange.LOVE IS NOTHING

Poem By: Dark Skylight
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oK,I HAD TO WRITE ABOUT LOVE,and the words I had to use are theese:LOVE,DESIRE,SPIRIT,TORN. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 19, 2008    Reads: 35    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   


Love.That's what I felt for you.

The hope and desire were

too strong.

I couldnt hide that feeling no

more. "I love you",I said to you,

but you...You just stood there

looking at me,not saying a word.

Than you finnaly spoken,but you

didn't said what I wanted to hear.

You said:"I tought we were just friends"

I was so dissapointed.My spirit was

torned.I was...huh.I was dying from

sadness.But ok,I guess that's the way

it has to be.

Me with friends.To have friendship,and

not love.But I cant live like that.No more.

Never.Im tearing my self apart,like what

you did to my spirit.

I wanna die.I dont belive in love.Love is

nothing.I will die.You will see.


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Comments:

Hey. It's good..very dark for someone of your age. you have a deep and older spirit that comes across in your writing

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks.Yea,I dont know why,but I like writting dark poems,and sad more than "happy poems",lol...Im glad you liked it. :)



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