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Submitted: Sep 26, 2008    Reads: 31    Comments: 1    Likes: 2   


Illusion in front of your eyes.

Illusion in front of your eyes.

Never be found.

Something is coming to you.

Something is getting you

Run away!

Hide your heart,leave your mind,

just run,and don't look back.

You will be fine.


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Comments:

ooooohhh my goodd!! thispoem is so amazing!! its shortness is soo catchy and the emotions in the poem are soo strong! the words are great and the idea, the way the poem is written was just so beautiful!

honestly this left me gawping.

"Hide your heart,leave your mind,"

that line....sooo beautiful, so touching..

this is one of my favourite poems of yours!!
*clap clap*
*clicks the i like button*

really really great job!=]=]=]
take care ^^
xxx

Posted: Sep 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Hhahah,thanks!!Im glad you liked it so much.I like it too.Well,I like all of my poems,lol,but k...Thanks for clicking that button,lol,and for reading.You take care too.
:)



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