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I Used To Think

Poem By: Demi Ulin
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Tags: sad, love, broken, heart, crush

This is just a poem I wrote a long time ago about a boy I was so inlove with. He always made fun of me, but i still loved him. It hurts to even think about it. So enjoy I guess. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 29, 2008    Reads: 40    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   


I used to think, that you were my everything.
My heart, my love, my engagement ring.
But then she walked through the door.
I still thought you liked me more.
I knew you liked me more without a doubt,
Until that dreadful day came... The day you asked her out.
I was hurt, lost, heart broken and not to mention confused.
I felt so stupid, so ugly, so used.
You were the one I wanted to hold so tight,
The feelings I couldn't fight,
I thought if we tried, we could make it right.
I used to think you were my everything,
My heart, my love, my engagement ring.
But now to me you're nothing more,
Than the old crush I once had,
That I no longer adore.


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i like it, i can relate to some parts of it.

Posted: Aug 29, 2008

I agree with wallmart lover. I can really relate to some segmants of your poem.

Posted: Aug 29, 2008



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