Hah, When I went to the hospital, where the hubby works, I saw the little pink babies and decided that I wanted to have one. To be honest, We tried for over a year and there was no success. I couldn't get pregnant. But I am thankful for Susie, She is now adopted into our family, Jake's little sister, by 17 years X.X. She thinks of us as her parents, And I'm okay with that, even though we are her siblings I enjoy raising her. View table of contents...

Submitted: Aug 18, 2008    Reads: 34    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   

Like a mother giving Birth

Or the Jazz music playing softly in the Background

My colour pencil is like that

It explodes

Explodes into a blast of colour

Life's colours more then just Black and White but Pink and Blue, a Splash of Green

You let it flow through

Past the Paper

Beyond life

I want to know..

What I did

How this won't work.

I want to know..

Where We're headed.

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Nomurcee187

Not bad. Try using the thesaurus so you won't end one line and begin the next one with the same word.

Posted: Aug 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Okay ^^ Will do. Like I said. My hubby STILL to this day makes fun of my spelling. I never was good at grammar :P

I'll work on this piece as well. Thanks Nomurcee

--DD

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