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Forever Friends

Poem By: DiscoveredDream
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A Friend of mine from across the way was having issues with a few friends and family. I felt terrible. Eventually words just slipped out onto the chat I was having. That Same night after pouring my soul out to 'Monster' I had a fight with a boyfriend in which I've known for the longest time. I realized friends come.. And some will stay but Family will be there for when you need advice. I consider Monster as a family member. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 17, 2008    Reads: 70    Comments: 9    Likes: 5   


You Have to live life one step in front of the other, don't skip a 'chapter' because you will get lost - you will have to face it eventually, go don't worry about what will happen in a week or a month or a year, hour by hour, day by day, step by step makes all the difference.

Think about something that makes you happy - someone you love with all your heart for the 'sad hour' if you feel like you didn't do your best then think of something you'd die to see again, or love again at the least.

Someone who is your family will be there to help you push out that watermelon - hold your hand through it all.

Someone who is at your wedding, in the front row, smiling and passing 'I love you signals' as you walk up the aisle.

And when you're 90 years old and still getting a luagh out of the embarrassing home videos of when you were a kid.

Someone who is there to laugh with you not at you - love you as much as they can love you.

Don't regret doing something just because it was wrong, Regret something because it was so right it had to be wrong. Maybe, that something opened all the doors for us, you and I will never know.

So when your sad or mad and want to let it out think about your likes, clear your head and remind yourself it will get better hour by hour, day by day, progression is made.

04/05/08


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hi! megan. true friends'll ever remain with us, no matter the fights and distance. and family is even closer. u've brought it all out with intense emotions and deep feelings. liked it very much. lol. ;-)

Posted: Sep 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Heehe, my name is Helen, But Megan works x.O. megan is my dear friend who basically created the account. lol, :) And thank you so much for the thoughtful comment. I really do appreciate friends like yourself.

Great poem. Its great when we have people close to us to share the burden, and laugh during the fun times.

Posted: Sep 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Adam, that was what I was getting to, you need someone there for you and usually friends or family comes first.

:) -DD

I like the first lines. My life is always so full of anxiety and worries. And then sometimes I wish I could leave it all behind but if you do, you miss out on how you face it. I love it. Keep writing more of this :]

Posted: Sep 28, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks so much Whiteroses, it means a lot to have comments that encourage me to keep writing.

-DD

Wow, what a wonderful poem!! i Loved this piece!

Posted: Sep 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, it was one of the first ones I've written after deaths hit my family, thought I'd come out and post it up =]

-DD

Hi MEGAN, way to go...such a thoughtful and insightful article...believe me i do have short temper and this article came as an eye opener....life is so short and we should surely "PAUSE" more often before making any mistake...we may lose a lifetime friendship...

And family sure is IMPORTANT, no matter what...lovely read.

Posted: Sep 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much Pratibha, I am happy to have such thoughtful comments. :)

Hey!
Thanks for welcoming me, this poem is true in many levels :D family is something you could never replace, they are your true friends someone who wont judge you, or tell you they are busy when u need to talk.
We should never believe we were wrong, because everything teaches us something, and we should enjoy that, life is only once to live.

great work!

Posted: Sep 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank youuu SaraS! :) Happy to have wonderful comments when I'm feeling down x]

Hello; thanks for welcoming me.

This seems a very personal, heartfelt poem.
I like it when people can express themselves as freely as you have, here, and I've found this extremely heartwarming :)

Posted: Oct 2, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks so much Jayseface, I'm happy to have great comments on my work, I'll be looking forward to your pieces soon.

Hi dream,I really liked your poem, forever friends.
It really touched me.Keep writing girl you have a talent. God Bless you.Angellynn.Ps....
If you find time check out some of my stuff.
See Ya.

Posted: Oct 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Angel :) Appreciate the comment, and right now I'm working on Saturday Flickers away, and I'm quite busy with it but I'll try to stop by =]

-DD

Hi, thank you for the welcome. I really liked this. Your advice to your friend was insightful and full of emotion. Well done.
Pam

Posted: Nov 8, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks Pam =)



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