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Poem By: DragonsSong
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a short poem a wrote while my thoughts wandered (hint--the name.) View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Sep 22, 2008    Reads: 46    Comments: 3    Likes: 1   


To follow through till the darkest hour

To settle into the night

To wake up among the dying flowers

To be afraid of the light

 

You wander down the broken halls

Of mortality on the brink

Only to hear your footsteps fall

All that you’re able to think

 

Is wonderings of the past dark days

You’ve wandered through life after life

To ponder over the countless ways

And name all the uses of a knife

 

The silences call

Like a beacon of light

Only to fall

Away from the fight

 

To lie in dishonor

On enemy shores

To die without honor

Another mans chore


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hi! d. excellent verse. it begins with the darkest thoughts and all morbid images r there. a very dynamic rhyming scheme adds to the beauty of this poem. u've done a wonderful job here. keep it up. lol. ;-)

Posted: Sep 29, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx, I always try to put some kind of soul in my writing, sometimes it works sometimes it doesn't, thanx!!!

THat's so good, hun!! :) I like it!

Posted: Nov 5, 2008

i love this one too!i love the part about waking with dying flowers, not the most pleasant thing to wake up to. this is another awesome poem!! i absolutely loved it! you have a really good chance of being chosen for alpha female!!! good luck!

Posted: Nov 7, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx



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