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Don't Forget Me

Poem By: Erin
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I wrote this when a really close friend of mine moved away.This was her going away gift and I dedicate this to her. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 6, 2007    Reads: 122    Comments: 7    Likes: 2   


No matter where our lives may take us,

The friendship we have will never end,

Because when I asked God for an angel,

You're the one He chose to send,

 

I am so blessed,

To have had a friend like you,

Because when I was down,

You knew exactly what to do,

 

You were always there for me,

Through the thick and thin,

And when I got in fights,

You would help me not to sin,

 

I will miss you so much,

Next year when I'm alone,

But God wants you to help someone else,

The way you always helped me on the phone,

 

The only thing,

That I can now wish, think, and say,

Is don't forget me,

When you go away.


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Comments:

Erin:

Another well written and expressed range of tender emotions. Liked it. A lot.

Check the presentation and structure on this one as well.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Posted: Jun 6, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you for your comments.

That was fabulous. I ABSOLUTLEY loved it. I had a friend who completely changed my life (and I can never thank her enough), but she moved away to another country.

I loved that it rhymed, too!

Great work!

Posted: Jun 7, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you. I would have hated it if she moved to another country, luckily she's still in the U. S.

I really like this poem. My best friend moved away a few years ago and this sums up exactly how I felt at the time. I love it xxx

Posted: Jun 14, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you, Kate. : )

Love Always,
Erin

Erin... great story... I think we have all felt this way before... Losing that "one" great friend... good flow but I agree the structure would make the read much easier...

I had a problem with some of my earlier works as far as the structure when I copied and pasted... and can't seem to edit them... now I type everything on here fresh... then the structure is how I like it to be... just a suggestion!... write on my friend!

Posted: Jul 10, 2007

Author Comment:

Okay thank you I'll try that. Thank you for your comment.

Love Always,
Erin


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"The Sound of Goodbye", 'its louder than any drama queen':a quote from a song.
The world may not hear or seem to move but our hearts move and hear it louder than anything else. beautiful poem about friendship, she had a purpose elsewhere, the best thing you can do is pray for her that she shares to the world what she gave you.
;)

Posted: Aug 24, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you Lionheart.

Love Always,
Erin

well, all i can say, yet again, is that you're amazing (:

Posted: Feb 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you.

Love Always,
Erin

That's so beautiful. Friends are like angels and they are always there whenever you call.

Keep up the great work

Olola.

Posted: May 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks and yes they are and I've been blessed with many of them.

Love Always,
Erin



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