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Its about to suicide and then rescued but still wants because she doesn't deserve to live. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Sep 29, 2007    Reads: 43    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   


Blood flowing out of me, and you come and stop the flow why? It’s my only hope of liberation, punishment, and even contentment. Let me die it’s the only way I can escape from life.

You tell me” Don’t give up in living!”

“You don’t deserve to die at all, as long I’m with you and alive.” You held out your hand to me.

I took your hand, hoping I won’t lose them one day…

You say “ I want to protect you and your fading smile, so… Don’t say things like “ I can’t smile” or “ I hate life.”

There’s no meaning in anything that’ll happen in the unseen future. However you insist there is…

You tell me “ For now you’re fine as you are, I know a time when you’ll realize it,” One day, one day I’ll will,

if death doesn’t get me ...

before I grasp it.


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My dear child, It pleases me to say there is better things out there and is a wonderful life awaiting and definitely your life is far far worth working on. Had it not been for a friend........3 years ago I would have been dead because I slit my wrists and overdosed on sleeping pills. Death will take you when it is ready but until then life is and can be beautiful I promise you that. Finding beauty in your writing,your sleeping and waking, looking at a flower or at the clouds and sun or a small blade of grass, listening to all the glorious wonders you can hear. Be strong little one, be strong.

Posted: Dec 7, 2007

Author Comment:

I will, I will, I will be strong, I will view life as a beautiful thing. I will not let you down. And I have changed thanks to my friends that care I thank you for your words and let them sink in. Life is beautiful.



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