The Black

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Poem By: Fletcher
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Man problems. What can I say? But its got a twist... you know me, its always got the spiritual side. (if you dont, go read the rest of my pieces)There´s always a connection.
(oh yeh, btw, this one´s a song too - theres just no "lyrics" option.) View table of contents...

Submitted: Oct 10, 2008 Reads: 17 Comments: 1 Likes: 1

I cant take this rejection anymore.

The scars my heart wears,

I bared to you my body

You took it as a sacrifice.

And now I´m gone

Far away from here

My soul is uncovered

I´m believing a lie

And now I´m strong

Stronger than the fears

My mind wants the black

I´m saying goodbye

Why can´t you understand

Sometimes I just need to cry

These tears are long overdue

All I needed was love from you…

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Comments:

Copperhorse

We all need love. We all cry and feel rejected at times, especially when we get hurt by love. I hope stanza three is a positive sign. I've been racing through your stuff (and news too). I'd love to know more, but I know, I'm a stranger. However, I'm still concerned and feel helpless. As the Japanese say, "There's no shame when you're a stranger." Come to my page and talk. I'll listen.

Posted: Oct 10, 2008

Author Comment:

stanza three is a mite more positive than the rest of it... I have to admit that all my recent pieces ive posted have deeper meanings than are told. I suppose there are very few who would understand even if i told them. But yeah, no worries about you being a stranger. Alot of "friends" that I have ive never actually met. lol