It's odd how something as simple as being given a cup of coffee can change your prospective of people and situations.
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Submitted: Dec 11, 2006
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Set yourself up
To let yourself fall
Always should wonder
If you wonder at all
Dream while your sleeping
And hope tomorrow you wake up
For now I'll just sit here
And drink from your cup
The cup is ceramic
On it a company's name
Coffees it's contents
I am to blame
The liquid is black
Was brewed a bit strong
Here with you now
I no longer belong
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Comments:
Heya. Liked it!
The rhythm and beat of the poem are probably more effective than the words that are written.
I know i'm picky, but just a few queries on these lines:
"Coffees it's contents
I'm am to blame"
I think you meant 'I am to blame', not I am I am to blame.
Also, I'm not sure how 'Coffees it is contents' makes sense. It may just a typo or perhaps a hidden meaning which I can't work out...
Either way, a nice poem!
Posted: Dec 12, 2006