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Last Wish

Poem By: Hugs and kisses
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I had a sugar high and then crashed rather badly, so I got kind of depressed like but then I thought of this poem! So, let's see what you think about it... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Mar 29, 2008    Reads: 81    Comments: 15    Likes: 6   


As the world around me fades away,

And I know that I can no longer stay,

I’ll remember all the good times I’ve had,

But also who stuck with me through the bad,

You wonder why you should be kind,

To give sight to those who are blind

I’ll give you an answer, the answer is this,

You might be a dying girl’s last wish,

The last thought of a close, good friend,

Who is reaching her sad, but timely end,

Even though, thankfully, my end is good and far,

I know you guys will be my last wish upon a star,

The ones who knew when I smiled it was true,

And knew every single though of you,

They heard my thoughts as if they were their own,

They heard me speak even when my mouth was closed,

Why be kind, you might wonder again,

If you still wonder, start over, begin this again,

I’ll give you an answer, the answer is this,

You might be a dying girl’s last wish.


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Comments:

OH MY GOD, HUGS AND KISSES!!!!!! How'd you come up with this? You're a genius!!!! Do you know that-- huh-huh-huh? Wow... this was so sweet, and moving, and sweet, and awesome, and sweet, and TOTALLY AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!

Lot's of special chocolate to you,

Ghiradelli Girl.

Posted: Mar 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Really? I'm glad you liked it so much. Well I'm glad someone liked it ^_^

wow, this was an amazing poem! One of the best I've read. Such a great idea. You have a few typos, like in the beginning I don't think there should have been a question mark. But great job! :)

Posted: Mar 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Ok, I'll delete the offensive question mark, but THANK YOU SO MUCH! I'm always happy when people like what I've written ^_^ I mean, who doesn't? but I'm really glad that you liked it.

awwwwwwwww. I loved it. fantastic hus and kisses:) haha.
steph:)

Posted: Mar 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much! Ok, it's kind of weird, one of my first stories had a girl named Stephanie (people called her steph)and she kind of looked like your pictures. But anyway, thank you so much for reading it and I'm glad that you liked it! Ever since I've started writing for Bookise I've written more poems than I've written in my entire life! I also started reading more poems. It's awesome!

haha really? maybe I'm your character come to life :P haha. yeah, i see what you mean, i've been writting more peoms too, haha

Posted: Mar 30, 2008

Author Comment:

AWESOME! I can't wait to see your new poems ^_^

Nice poem every thing fits together quite well. Good job
--Hoodling--

Posted: Apr 3, 2008

awww. iloved it alot
like it was soooo cute...

Posted: Apr 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! I love it when people comment, so I'm supper happy that people are ^_^ Anyway, I'm so happy you commented (as mentioned earlier) and thank you for it.

Wow, it's just amazing.

Posted: Apr 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much! I'm so happy that you commented, that orange "new messages" box always makes me smile ^_^

Oh wow... I'm speechless, it was that wonderful.

Posted: Apr 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Oooh speechless, I don't think I've ever made anyone speechless before: cool! Anyhoo, THANK YOU SO MUCH! I'm glad you like this so much! *bounces up and down and claps* Divena likes my poem yay! Anyway, thank you for commenting.

Amazing!!! im speechless! It all fit so nicely and was soooo cute! U made me smile!!!

Posted: May 3, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm really glad that I made you smile ^.^ you liked it too! Thank you sooooo much!

Wow, I like this poem. It does show that you were a bit depressed. Hope you are happier!

Posted: May 10, 2008

Author Comment:

I wrote this a while, so I'm not depressed anymore. You know me, I don't exactly stay depressed for a long time...anyway, thanks for the thought ^.^

Good poem. You have the touch and a perspective worth sharing.

Posted: May 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Really? Thank you so much ^.^ I'm really happy that you liked my poem and left such a lovely comment!!! Comments always make me so excited, so I'm happy that this comment is so good. Thanks sooo much!!!

I loved this one so much , i came back to read this again....

Posted: May 24, 2008

Author Comment:

awwww that's so sweet of you! Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed this poem so much!

Last Wish... How deep the words are! So wonderfully written! I just love this poem!

Posted: May 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! I'm really happy you enjoyed it so much! I like your comments a lot, I'll let you know when I post more poems ^.^

Tor Steinsland
(not registered user)

Nice poem. When I read it I felt you were talking to me.

But on the other hand what have I ever done for you?

Read your writing.
Made comments.
Enjoyed your comments.

Maybe that's all that can be expected of me as your long distance friend.

And maybe that is enough

for you.

Posted: May 27, 2008

Author Comment:

^.^ that's so true! I think it's interesting how you think that I'm talking to you, I've never had anyone say that about my poems before, so thank you :) Anyway, thanks for another lovely comment and I hope you have a lovely day!

love it love it love it!!!!!
you sound like someone I know!!!!!
I LOVE YOU LOTS,
~*Keepers' River*~

Posted: Jun 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Awwww thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it so much ^.^



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