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Missunderstood

Poem By: invisiblexme
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this is one of those 'what am i?' poems. i wrote it for my english class last year. let me know what you think it is. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: May 11, 2008    Reads: 128    Comments: 8    Likes: 5   


Misunderstood
 
I’m sometimes hairy,
But I’m not a mammal.
I’m hated and feared
Like a ferocious monster.
I can kill with a bite,
Or raise the hairs on your neck
With my prickly feet.
 
I come in many sizes,
As big as your hand,
Or as small as an ant.
I live in your house,
But you never notice me.
I look like a bug,
But I’m really not.
I live in the nightmares
Of people big and small.
 
I wait in my lair
For my food to come.
 My home is invisible,
And sometimes beautiful
When it’s covered in dew.
It’s as strong as rope,
But as delicate as lace.
It’s a piece of art
That is rarely praised.
Because my art was made
From my own special thread
That sticks to my victims
And even to you.
You walk through my house
All the time
Without ever knowing
Taking piece of it with you.
My many legs and eyes
May scare you.
But really I’m just misunderstood.


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Comments:

That is really great! My little sister's terrified of spiders. Spiderwebs are definately beautiful when they have dew on them... like diamonds. :-D

Posted: May 17, 2008

Author Comment:

lol spiders are cool, i guess. as long as they dont crawl on me, im fine with them...most of the time. if theyre huge, i get a little scared. thanks for reading! =)

Spiders are misunderstood...most people just flush em down the drain..but they are part a of the human mythology...every culture mentions these creatures...it is their web of illusion hiding the truth..really clever poem...a riddle..wrapped up in an enigma....

Posted: May 24, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks for reading =D

Aww, I love spiders! They really are just misunderstood...the poor things. They have to whole world against them. Beautiful poem. ^-^

Posted: May 28, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks for reading! =D

hi! i. i always thought of spiders as creepy creatures but the poem is enjoyable with the "guess who" element thrown in. lol. ;-)

Posted: May 30, 2008

Author Comment:

lol thanks for reading! =)

Wow! Wow! Amazing!!!!!!! I loved it!!!

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

um...thanks =)

That is really one beautiful poem! :)

Posted: Jun 29, 2008

Author Comment:

...really? well, ok then, thanks! =)

lol...i would have nevr guessed it is SPIDER...i am poor in guessing...have always been...

yes, even i agree...i am not very comfortable with SPIDERS....

Posted: Sep 16, 2008

Author Comment:

im not really comfortable around them either, but i feel like people dont appreciate all they do for us. i mean, they kill mosquitos, which are like the most annoying thing ever. thanks so much for reading! =)

In the N.A.Indian shamanic tradition spider was symbolic of the bringer of language:the shape of sounds/letters were found in the web.
How intriguing that the 'truthful and silent invisiblexme' writes about such a thing :)
Beautifully constructed, strong poems you write....spiderwoman :):)
thx 4 gr8 poetry... a joy to experience

Posted: Dec 2, 2008

Author Comment:

spiderwoman...lol. i didn't know that about what a spider was symbolic of when i wrote this. but that's really cool and i'm glad i know that now. thanks for your wonderful comment! =)



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