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this is one of those 'what am i?' poems. i wrote it for my english class last year. let me know what you think it is. View table of contents...
Submitted: May 11, 2008 Reads: 128 Comments: 8 Likes: 5
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That is really great! My little sister's terrified of spiders. Spiderwebs are definately beautiful when they have dew on them... like diamonds. :-D
Posted: May 17, 2008
Spiders are misunderstood...most people just flush em down the drain..but they are part a of the human mythology...every culture mentions these creatures...it is their web of illusion hiding the truth..really clever poem...a riddle..wrapped up in an enigma....
Posted: May 24, 2008
Aww, I love spiders! They really are just misunderstood...the poor things. They have to whole world against them. Beautiful poem. ^-^
Posted: May 28, 2008
hi! i. i always thought of spiders as creepy creatures but the poem is enjoyable with the "guess who" element thrown in. lol. ;-)
Posted: May 30, 2008
Wow! Wow! Amazing!!!!!!! I loved it!!!
Posted: Jun 11, 2008
That is really one beautiful poem! :)
Posted: Jun 29, 2008
lol...i would have nevr guessed it is SPIDER...i am poor in guessing...have always been...
yes, even i agree...i am not very comfortable with SPIDERS....
Posted: Sep 16, 2008
In the N.A.Indian shamanic tradition spider was symbolic of the bringer of language:the shape of sounds/letters were found in the web.
How intriguing that the 'truthful and silent invisiblexme' writes about such a thing :)
Beautifully constructed, strong poems you write....spiderwoman :):)
thx 4 gr8 poetry... a joy to experience
Posted: Dec 2, 2008
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