
Random First Lines: Derest Ana,I've betrayed youonce, yet again.IN the mirror,you've shown me truth.Though I was blindand did not... : Young Adult » Read
This poem is one I wrote for Collge Fiction class, and my teacher suggested that we publish a poem somewhere. I hope you enjoy! View table of contents...
Submitted: Jan 3, 2008 Reads: 89 Comments: 10 Likes: 5
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Posted: Jan 3, 2008
Really enjoyed this made me think of my daughter when she was with me many years ago...... VVV GOOD. A little sad but heartfelt too..... Juliet
Posted: Jan 4, 2008
A very nice heartfelt poem. Its very truthful to the many parents that sacrifice all their energy just so their kids can have dinner.
You mentioned you listened to the dixie chicks song while writing. It a good creative stimulus, and creates a strange emotion. I use it too, its creates the rhythm for me.
Posted: Mar 9, 2008
This was so sweet and so real. I bet you got a good marks on it.
Posted: Apr 15, 2008
hi! jessy. selfless love. even in adversity it'll survive. u've given a vivid portrayal. ;-)
Posted: May 28, 2008
Love is powerful than anything. It can melt the hardest heart, and can mend the worst pain. Beautifully written:)
Posted: Jun 1, 2008
A very sweet poem. Loved it
Posted: Jun 3, 2008
this is beautiful and lovely!
I really liked this one!!
Posted: Jul 30, 2008
DEAR DEAR JESSY...this is so so so sweet...i would get diabetes....this is so cute....keep going buddy...
Posted: Sep 5, 2008
Very good poem. Very sweet!
Posted: Sep 24, 2008
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